Sunday, September 23, 2012

Darling angel...


Darling angel;  
not my original angel, stolen from google
I thought it is lust or the crush,
that makes me owe for love

But it makes me feverish in mind,
O! That’s divine, it’s
something that spreads in my neural ravine
Oh! I am still fine.

Though many surround and
when you are around,
You pull me with your smile 
and throw me in air
and I don’t know, could be a mile

You make the air romantic and me frantic
Thou art my love, though everything looks dramatic

Angel, my angel,
Somebody asked me to show the mother of beauty
they might have thought I will show you as my deity 
but I didn't show you my deity; though you are lovely, 
 but question is the mother of beauty
I said, 'I still didn't meet her mother', sweetly.

29 comments:

  1. It's really nice, Sathish!
    Keep it up:)

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    1. frankly, should be the influence of magical poetesses like you and few other poets :)

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  3. And I thought valentine's day is long over.
    Very sweet and full on romance :D

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    1. :) so sweet of you.
      And One-day valentine's day is for lovers and for unconditional one-sided; it's every day.

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  4. Beautiful thoughts!...Awesomely written poem :)

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    1. Valli that's a pulitzer for me :) I always adore your lines.

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  5. LOL...The last line is awesome...awesome! Very well put, Satish!
    Now I'm going to 'steal' that pic from your page to write a sequel ...should I??
    Very very enjoyable piece...:))

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    1. :) :) :) happy to see your comment... Thank you :)
      will be very happy if you do it :)

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  6. very nicely written..:)..short n sweet..

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  7. One of the best poems I have seen after a long long time...keep up the good work bro :)

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    1. Greatly humbled :) thanks for your kind words.

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  8. Beautiful poem and the expressions used are breath taking. :)

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  9. awhh!! a cute poem filled with loads of emotions..
    appreciate the work..
    keep writing :)

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  10. Lovely poem Sathish..

    You make the air romantic and me frantic
    Thou art my love, though everything looks dramatic..

    loved those lines..

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