God has a plan
You will not
understand
Keep things move on
Right on time people
will be thereon
Let the love to desert
you freely
At a distance you will
see oasis slowly
Every step towards the
every next step
There exist lot of
steps to eschew
Allow your heart to accommodate
fear,
accommodate tear, but
remember days are few
but there exist always
a lot of time to sew
Love is not a
destination
short cuts only bring deception
Love is a path to
follow
tell your soul heart
is not a hallow
instinct heeds signs
but to listen you need to allow
For no reason depression
will down you one day,
to the divine; it’s
the time for your complete succumb
To exile from body is
not your freedom,
though boredom makes
you struggle and become numb
a day will come, pure love
will embrace and remove your scum
Wait for the sun to rise,
day to shine
Understand, darkness
is not a curse but a test by divine.
This is too good, Sathish. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDelete"Let the love to desert you freely
At a distance you will see oasis slowly"---SWEET!
thanks for quoting what you like :)) what more a writer will love to see
DeleteSathish - looks you've just written down what I had in mind .. I was thinking of writing something similar as I looked back at this year ... But I must confess that I wouldn't have been able to pen it down so beautifully !!
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Thank you so much...
DeleteFrankly, whatever you write about your 2 years old poetry sounds n times better that this :)))
well, i don't understand poetry but loved this one. beautifully written.
ReplyDeletealong with your writing and cartoon liked this comment and loved you frankness :)))
Delete...either you comment me or not / vote me or not I will read few people's post but i may not comment... and your one among.
thanks for stopping by.
"Wait for the sun to rise, day to shine
ReplyDeleteUnderstand, darkness is not a curse but a test by divine."
Lovely thoughts and motivating poem...
0Loved your captions for my pics, Thank you so much for suggesting :)
thanks so much for your generous words Valli...
Deletedarkness is not curse but a test of divine ... how true ! and just when I needed a poem like this ! thank you Satish ...
ReplyDeleteThanks so much too...
DeleteEverybody has to take up the test, just to get stronger enough...
Very inspiring poem about love, and life. Yes, God has the plan, we need to implement it, make the blueprint our life.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leo...
Deletethanks for stopping by.
Wow...such an inspiring piece, Sathish. So well rhymed...this is something I'll never learn!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the compliment.
DeleteYou need not learn cause you inspired me many times with your poetry..
one to mention is "Hunt For A Home"
Indeed darkness is not a curse..but "test divine"...
ReplyDeletenice thought
Thank you Aparna. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteLove is not a destination
ReplyDeleteshort cuts only bring deception
How true, if only everyone would get this!!
Thank you Ghazala...
Delete...frankly, experience taught me.