Friday, December 7, 2012

A Plan...



God has a plan
You will not understand
Keep things move on
Right on time people will be thereon
Let the love to desert you freely
At a distance you will see oasis slowly

Every step towards the every next step
There exist lot of steps to eschew
Allow your heart to accommodate fear,
accommodate tear, but remember days are few
but there exist always a lot of time to sew

Love is not a destination
short cuts only bring deception
Love is a path to follow
tell your soul heart is not a hallow
instinct heeds signs but to listen you need to allow

For no reason depression will down you one day,
to the divine; it’s the time for your complete succumb
To exile from body is not your freedom,
though boredom makes you struggle and become numb
a day will come, pure love will embrace and remove your scum

Wait for the sun to rise, day to shine
Understand, darkness is not a curse but a test by divine.

18 comments:

  1. This is too good, Sathish. Beautiful poem.
    "Let the love to desert you freely
    At a distance you will see oasis slowly"---SWEET!

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    1. thanks for quoting what you like :)) what more a writer will love to see

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  2. Sathish - looks you've just written down what I had in mind .. I was thinking of writing something similar as I looked back at this year ... But I must confess that I wouldn't have been able to pen it down so beautifully !!

    :D

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    1. Thank you so much...
      Frankly, whatever you write about your 2 years old poetry sounds n times better that this :)))

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  3. well, i don't understand poetry but loved this one. beautifully written.

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    1. along with your writing and cartoon liked this comment and loved you frankness :)))
      ...either you comment me or not / vote me or not I will read few people's post but i may not comment... and your one among.
      thanks for stopping by.

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  4. "Wait for the sun to rise, day to shine
    Understand, darkness is not a curse but a test by divine."
    Lovely thoughts and motivating poem...

    0Loved your captions for my pics, Thank you so much for suggesting :)

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    1. thanks so much for your generous words Valli...

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  5. darkness is not curse but a test of divine ... how true ! and just when I needed a poem like this ! thank you Satish ...

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    1. Thanks so much too...
      Everybody has to take up the test, just to get stronger enough...

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  6. Very inspiring poem about love, and life. Yes, God has the plan, we need to implement it, make the blueprint our life.

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  7. Wow...such an inspiring piece, Sathish. So well rhymed...this is something I'll never learn!

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    1. Thanks for the compliment.
      You need not learn cause you inspired me many times with your poetry..
      one to mention is "Hunt For A Home"

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  8. Indeed darkness is not a curse..but "test divine"...
    nice thought

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    1. Thank you Aparna. Thanks for stopping by.

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  9. Love is not a destination
    short cuts only bring deception

    How true, if only everyone would get this!!

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    1. Thank you Ghazala...
      ...frankly, experience taught me.

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