Sunday, January 13, 2013

Sweet feel called love


Sweet feel called love,
When two people agrees lust is lovable
No difference of opinion
Crush is the inception, it’s amiable

Needle of the clock kills
When we wait for someone special
Heart smashes all our cloys - and
Longing, when we see our beloved, makes us emotional




It’s when lips speaks to lips
Aroma of romance spreads in breathe
In love, to get part is a sin, to respire
The usual air you grow a fin, believe it is a truth

You smile when you are alone and
You will be alone among hundreds and thousands
Acoustic of her voice you will heed
Though numerous mortals acts as burdens

Kiss slowly, passionately
Let your lips decide the time to part least a string 
Love intensely, heartily  
Let God decide when to bring your off-spring

22 comments:

  1. Sweet and romantic! ♥
    Beautifully penned :)

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  2. beauty of this poem is in its simplicity...its really beautiful and passionate its intense and soft both at the same time... true you have to love intensly , whole heartedly..

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  3. Beautiful lines...lovely romantic read, Sathish! Loved this!

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  4. how romantic and beautiful !

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    1. how sweet of you to encourage me always :)

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  5. ipadi solli solli enna love panna vachiruvinga pola ;)

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  6. yaru manasula yaru????

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  7. sathish manasula yaru ???? avangaluku enna paeru???

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    1. Divi, Sathish manasula yaru nu manasula irrukaravanga kita than kekanum and avanga peru avangaluke tereyum :))

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  8. You are seriously romantic, the last lines were good advice :p

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  9. Deepest love is the biggest sorrow in the world.. :-( Never love a person more then ur life it wil kill u alot when u miss a person

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    1. when expectation strikes, ego slanders, you want to arrest your beloved in a cage, and bravery fails; love becomes a sorrow.
      love intensely just to be in love not to be loved... then your love will be a sparrow... fly high colorfully.

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  10. Real romantic but intense as always!

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    1. :) Thanks Anjali... thanks for your presence here after a long time :)))

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  11. Intense feelings written very romantically.. :)

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    1. Thanks you very much for the comment Kitty :)

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  12. You smile when you are alone and You will be alone among hundreds and thousands....
    love your words. :)

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