Sweet feel called love,
When two people agrees lust is lovable
No difference of opinion
Crush is the inception, it’s amiable
Needle of the clock kills
When we wait for someone special
Heart smashes all our cloys - and
Longing, when we see our beloved, makes us emotional
It’s when lips speaks to lips
Aroma of romance spreads in breathe
In love, to get part is a sin, to respire
The usual air you grow a fin, believe it is a truth
You smile when you are alone and
You will be alone among hundreds and thousands
Acoustic of her voice you will heed
Though numerous mortals acts as burdens
Kiss slowly, passionately
Let your lips decide the time to part least a string
Love intensely, heartily
Let God decide when to bring your off-spring
Sweet and romantic! ♥
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned :)
:)) thanks Valli...
Deletebeauty of this poem is in its simplicity...its really beautiful and passionate its intense and soft both at the same time... true you have to love intensly , whole heartedly..
ReplyDeletethanks aparna :)
DeleteBeautiful lines...lovely romantic read, Sathish! Loved this!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton :))
Deletehow romantic and beautiful !
ReplyDeletehow sweet of you to encourage me always :)
Deleteipadi solli solli enna love panna vachiruvinga pola ;)
ReplyDeleteAll the best Charrlie
Deleteyaru manasula yaru????
ReplyDeletesathish manasula yaru ???? avangaluku enna paeru???
ReplyDeleteDivi, Sathish manasula yaru nu manasula irrukaravanga kita than kekanum and avanga peru avangaluke tereyum :))
DeleteYou are seriously romantic, the last lines were good advice :p
ReplyDeleteThank you :)))
DeleteDeepest love is the biggest sorrow in the world.. :-( Never love a person more then ur life it wil kill u alot when u miss a person
ReplyDeletewhen expectation strikes, ego slanders, you want to arrest your beloved in a cage, and bravery fails; love becomes a sorrow.
Deletelove intensely just to be in love not to be loved... then your love will be a sparrow... fly high colorfully.
Real romantic but intense as always!
ReplyDelete:) Thanks Anjali... thanks for your presence here after a long time :)))
DeleteIntense feelings written very romantically.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks you very much for the comment Kitty :)
DeleteYou smile when you are alone and You will be alone among hundreds and thousands....
ReplyDeletelove your words. :)