Few a minutes it took to realize for
him on what he did the past half hour.
As if the respiratory organs malfunctioning the air tried its best to
get in and lungs suffered its best to take oxygen from it to sooth the
throbbing heart not just because of what has happened but the because of the
wild running towards no where the destination is.
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Not a good day to end with but when they sat next
to next with no words to talk but with more than the enough love to
exchange. Both of them thought the heart
of the other is traveling far in a different direction but they know not that
there are no directions in love neither a road to stroll. When a metal crap was
ready to transport them they got in with out any unusual disagreement. She got down in her stop. Though he heard the voice of her heart asking
him to get down; he hesitated as the beats of his throbbing heart was louder
than her soul’s voice.
He threw a message in to the air for
all the angels in the atmosphere to tell her that he is longing for her, along
with a text message from his mobile phone asking if she is safe in train. Few minutes passed, she didn't show any light
on his mobile phone. He got into his
train which physically carries into his place for him to sleep though virtually
his soul travels in a different direction which is no different from of where
she is.
Subsided the patience, he rang her, she didn't pick. She shouldn't have noticed, he thought. Five minutes more passed he disturbed the air
with his mobile phone again to reach her, she didn't pick. The third time, fourth, fifth time, no
response. Slightly his rate of beat
started rising. His train blew horn and
started moving, he dialed her number but she failed him again. He got down from the moving train and started
running, for a minute he did not know where he is running. Little while his brain woke up and asked him,
where the hell are you running? He thought for no second and said, to her.
But where, how, what could
have happened, is she is sitting in the station waiting for the train or
something else, why the hell she not picking the bloody phone? How many questions to answer but he has got no
time, in a minute he wants to see her, else his heart would become dynamite to
burst him in to pieces and pieces.
No time he gave his respiratory organs to inhale or
exhale, dipped in the ice cubes of fear slowly his hands and legs went
numb. He ran wild to, a different, near
by station to catch the train that takes her to home. Reaching the station he saw the train in the
opposite side, to catch, for which he has to take a foot over bridge. Skipping how many steps he doesn't know, he
ran like a wild beast in fear. He got
into the train and the questions started again, train horned, first place to
run and search her in her station and then to the place where she got down from
the bus, he decided. I am not crying, nothing has happened, she
is alright, he repeated with gray lines in his lashes.
The
phone beeped, just now in train.
O! He got is life back. Got down from the running train sat on the
steps of the foot over bridge trying to catch his breathe. He text-ed her of what has happened to show
his angry.
As slow as possible he walked back to his station
and got into his train and closed his eyes and leaned back in his seat to go
over what has happened in past few minutes.
Breathing as hard as possible to sooth his throbbing heart he wiped his
tears from the sides of his eyes, knowing not if it’s happy tears or out of
fears.
The
phone beeped again, why did you do that?
Because…because I am mad on you, he replied.
Excellent Sathish. Narration is outstanding...As I read was too curious to know the end. Such a sweet one. Love was everywhere in the air :)
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