Walking out of your
sight
But not letting you walk
out my mind.
I know, you will
believe me on the eight day of the week,
Like a shining sun in
midnight, oh! I know I’m a freak.
I may wake up from
the pyre with a drop of your tears.
A drop of tear which I
never want you to shed even at my death.
Life started with
your vision in my dream,
I guess my dream is
going to be just a vision in the stream.
I know it is a sin to
fall in love with an angel, but
I am yet another
mortal, how did you expect to realize love is fatal.
Tear me in to pieces,
before the longing fires me to abyss
Suffering is not
something new to hearts in love
And it’s the one
which decides heaven or hell where to shove.
Walking out of your
sight and it’s not my mistake that
You’re cursed with
beauty and me with eyesight.
With love without loved,
-Not me who you think as
me.
Image courtesy: google, I could not find the photographer who reflected my mind or the website (orginal)
I may wake up from the pyre with a drop of your tears.
ReplyDeleteA drop of tear which I never want you to shed even at my death.
Amazing lines..
Thanks Diwakar :)
Deletenicely written mate.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mani
DeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajesh
DeleteVery nice. Look forward to more.
ReplyDelete:) 10x for dropping by.
Deletehey this shud b converted into a song,i was humming it while readin...very nice
ReplyDeleteThanks for that alka
Deletegreatly humbled, thanks for the appreciation...
it s very usual in this period of life. any how enjoy.
DeleteYou write very well, Satish!!! Great poem. In btw is that pic yours? If yes, then I LOVE it! If no, then you need to give photo credits :(
ReplyDelete10x Bhavana... I found it somewhere in google where in I found nobody to give credit for the photograph... anyways will give credit to google ;)
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ReplyDeleteThanks...
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