Darling angel;
not my original angel, stolen from google |
I thought it is lust or the crush,
that makes me owe for love
But it makes me feverish in mind,
O! That’s divine, it’s
something that spreads in my neural ravine
Oh! I am still fine.
Though many surround and
when you are around,
You pull me with your smile
and throw me in air
and throw me in air
and I don’t know, could be a mile
You make the air romantic and me frantic
Thou art my love, though everything looks dramatic
Angel, my angel,
Somebody asked me to show the mother of beauty
they might have thought I will show you as my deity
but I didn't show you my deity; though you are lovely,
but question is the mother of beauty
I said, 'I still didn't meet her mother', sweetly.
It's really nice, Sathish!
ReplyDeleteKeep it up:)
oh! You made my day... Thank you :)
Deletehidden talent ,is it ??
ReplyDeletefrankly, should be the influence of magical poetesses like you and few other poets :)
DeleteBeautiful poem Sathish :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashitha :)
Delete:D Really nice!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteAnd I thought valentine's day is long over.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet and full on romance :D
:) so sweet of you.
DeleteAnd One-day valentine's day is for lovers and for unconditional one-sided; it's every day.
Beautiful and charming !
ReplyDelete:) Thank you Soooo much
DeleteBeautiful thoughts!...Awesomely written poem :)
ReplyDeleteValli that's a pulitzer for me :) I always adore your lines.
Deleteha ha! Good one!
ReplyDelete:) thanks.
DeleteLOL...The last line is awesome...awesome! Very well put, Satish!
ReplyDeleteNow I'm going to 'steal' that pic from your page to write a sequel ...should I??
Very very enjoyable piece...:))
:) :) :) happy to see your comment... Thank you :)
Deletewill be very happy if you do it :)
very nicely written..:)..short n sweet..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteBeautiful lines...
ReplyDeleteThanks Priti
DeleteOne of the best poems I have seen after a long long time...keep up the good work bro :)
ReplyDeleteGreatly humbled :) thanks for your kind words.
DeleteNice poem
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteBeautiful poem and the expressions used are breath taking. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the sweet words Saru :)
Deleteawhh!! a cute poem filled with loads of emotions..
ReplyDeleteappreciate the work..
keep writing :)
Thanks Aswathy
DeleteLovely poem Sathish..
ReplyDeleteYou make the air romantic and me frantic
Thou art my love, though everything looks dramatic..
loved those lines..
Thanks deepak..
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